A man hits his son to teach him a lesson,
The punishments vary,
He likes to keep him guessin’.
The boy grows up with a burden to carry.
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The boy becomes a man,
That man finds himself a wife,
They have themselves a son,
They start themselves a life.
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But, it’s rife with strife,
From the start.
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The man hurts his boy,
Because of a broken heart.
The boy leaves home young,
With his heart also torn apart.
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He grows up high strung.
Infamous with the law.
No deeds of his will go unsung.
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Until one day.
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A new life had sprung.
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A baby girl was here to stay
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Her father became a boozer,
Working hard to drown his sorrows.
In his drunken stupors, he’d abuse her,
Then drink more to forget tomorrow.
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The girl evolves to be shaken,
From sporadic trauma undertaken.
Her anxieties don’t take her far,
As her self-esteem collapses like a neutron star.
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Everything’s intense,
All her problems seem immense.
All people appear with only pretense,
From outside her pretty heart.
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She winds up with a wicked man,
To be her counterpart.
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Then without a plan…
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They have
A son.
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The pain train shuns no one.
So true! Good one Mathew!
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Thanks 😉 Wrote it for like 2 weeks ahead but I liked this one too much to hold it back. 🙂
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good one…thanks for share
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Just a heads up that you were sent to my spam box. Thanks for the comment. 🙂
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I love this poem❤️But it is painfully and it hurt…. but you write so good✍🏻👏🏻
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Thank you!
Yeah it’s not a happy one. I guess I just wanted to convey how abuse gets passed on if you’re not strong enough to break the chain yourself
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That word… «chain»… so much emotions to it…. my collection of poems has this word in it ..
I know very well what you are saying…
Sad, but true…
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It doesn’t have to be sad and not all abuse spawns more abuse, but it’s more like a word of caution. My Dad was mistreated by his Dad when he was young, and he ended up being a fucking asshole to me as I grew up (excuse my language). However, I’m not going to be like that with my daughter. I’ll make damn sure 😉
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I don’t mind your language, I understand. I was beaten and more by my mom, my dad was an alcoholic, but he was the one who cared too …. (briefly explained)…
my son is 13 and never experienced what I did… And I always tell him I love you because I never heard that when I was a little girl and I love my son unconditional and he is always good enough.. I always hear how stupid snd ugly and inept I was…
you are YOU, be proud❤️
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Very beautiful Orki 😊 I’m glad you’re in a better place now.
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Thank you. You are a girls best friend…
Take care.
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The cycle of abuse is so terribly hard to break.
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We can do it though. I’ll be breaking it for my daughters sake. I think it starts with awareness first.
Thanks for reading and commenting Liz 😊
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I really like it❤️
Very good!! It is poignant
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You da best 🥰 Thank you
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Awww…… thank you 🤩❤️
And you too da best 😊😊😍
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Tale as old as time told in a sensitive and stylistic way. Great Post 🖤
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Thanks! Yes – I’ve seen it and experienced it.
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Yup, me too sadly. Those kinds of experiences never leave you 🖤
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Although we also each have the power to break that cycle. Life’s not quite as grim as my poem ;P It just can be.
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Yes, indeed we do. Life is always worse in poems 😉🖤
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Bahahah
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😁🖤
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So much truth.
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😉
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Oh, sweetie, for the most this is true but there is one who can break the cycle and set all free of this and His Name is Christ Jesus. Much love sent to you and those who need freedom.:)
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Oh we all have the power to break this cycle.
It’s just important to be aware how it can be passed on. I have a daughter and it’s important to me to not pass the suffering cycle on to her 🙂 Thanks for your comment.
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Kiss her for me.:)
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Hahah. Okay will do 😀
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Powerful.
Almost unbearable to read, as it should be.
Keep up the good work
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Well, it seems tragedy and pain does form a vicious loop. It’s truly painful and your poem is very emotional. I feel sad for the son and I am feel truly sorry you had to face the same. I’ve never been through this and neither had been my parents. Family values run high in our blood and I hope they become acclaimed all over the world!
I am totally sure your daughter won’t have to face any such pain because you are such an amazing person!
Lots of love to you and your family and I hope everyone in okay 🙂
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Thanks Dragon. I’m very glad you’ve never had to experience an emotionally abusive parent.
I will break the cycle for my daughter, absolutely. It’s taken a lot of hard work on my part to overcome the bad habits instilled in me through my home life. That’s for sure.
I hope your exams went well!
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I am lucky too.
It must have been hard work for you, to shatter the cages of abuse your father had given you. But you have overcome, and that’s why I admire you so much! So courageous, you are.
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Nah I’m not so courageous. Just doing what I can to be happy and to pass it on to others.
Thanks though. 🤗
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For me, you certainly are very courageous! If I were in your place I may have fallen long before… 🙂
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Reblogged this on Scribblers Arena and commented:
Just wanted to share this with you. Anyone else been part of the pain train?
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I wept at reading this…
This is a poem with an enduring feel.
Would you mind if I consider borrowing these words to add to a possible blog I may plan?
🙂
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As long as you quote it and link back to this page. Then I don’t mind. I’d rather you not post the whole thing verbatim unless you reblog it.
Thanks for the compliment.
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Of course. You’ll probably receive a pingback if I do include it for your approval. I will respect your wishes too, of course.
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