A gentle breeze brushes the Spartan’s backs,
Chilling beads of sweat upon their skin.
The Persians ready for their last attack.
The Spartan’s odds were not to win.
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Standing boot to boot with all their brothers,
Muted murmurs shown love to one another.
The air was dry and the sun burned hot,
It wasn’t the perfect day to die,
But it was the best they’d got.
~
Not one of them would cry.
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Under the wings of Leonidas,
They were reaching for the sky.
~
Too bad the sky was full of arrows.
For now, a few of them would die.
~
There was no more singing for the sparrows,
As the world drowned in fierce war-cries.
The next wave of Xerxes men approached –
The Spartan position, so they would encroach –
To ensure that every single one would die.
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After two fulls days of Greek men fighting,
They’d be thankful for their reprieve.
Heavens arms were looking quite inviting,
May their mother’s rest easy in their grief.
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From the front advanced 10,000 strong,
From the flank, the Persian’s finest.
The Immortals sought to end their song.
The Spartans sought to prove them spineless.
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The first wave of Persians crashed upon their shields,
Spartan spears stabbed, cracked and shattered.
When spears broke, short-swords found hands of the battered.
Until finally through blood, sweat and rage,
A volley of arrows fell to clear the stage.
Nothing but blood, guts and brains remained,
To leave that hallowed Earth completely stained.
The 300 Spartans plus a number of other Greek soldiers, under the leadership of King Leonidas, stayed behind at the passage of Thermopylae and acted as a rear guard for retreating allies. It is estimated that they had saved the lives of around 3000 Greek allies by delaying the Persian advance as those Greek soldiers escaped. May their heroism, courage and selflessness never be forgotten.
A tremendous story of bravery and the warrior spirit.
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I think I need me a Spartan tattoo now.
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I’ve already got one haha
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Amazing
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Haha thanks, though it’s actually not a very good one. It was the first tattoo I ever got, and I was too young to know what a good tattoo should look like or cost (I got ripped off!)
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Ahh it happens. I have one that I’m not too proud of actually. My tribal.
Maybe someone can re-work it one day? I’m trying to do that with mine.
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Yeah, a re-work is a good idea! I intend (one day) to have full sleeves on my arms and extending across my shoulders to basically bring all my tattoos together, so that might help it blend in
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Nice. I just need to have a decent cash flow again so I can finish the rework of my tribal. Itll probably cost me another 1000$ at least.
They’re damn addictive. How many do you have?
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Six right now. Four are on my arms and the other two on my chest.
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Nice. Yeah I’m all upper body as well! Take care
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Brilliant poetry – love that vivid tribute to a warrior brotherhood. Great work!
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Thanks so much Tom!
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Lovely poem. And great voice! I did some reading of poems for a podcast but I’m so nervous that it has yet to see the light of day.
I’ve seen a lot of documentary about Spartan soldiers and how they come to be and this poem just reminded me the bitter life they lead.
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It’s good to see you back Jessica! Thanks a bunch for your feedback. This one I wrote just because I’d always admired their courage and I find war interesting. How’ve you been?
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Oh I’m great. Thanks for asking. As I mention to a couple of bloggers I’m in a place with no phone signal, but I’m enjoying because I’m surrounded by peaceful nature and far from city stress.
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Such a great poem! What a great way to bring history to limelight! Truly amazing!
(Lots of inspiration from another brave warrior poet…!)
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❤ ❤ ❤ Thank you warrior 😉
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You are one, too. 🙂
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First of all, this is so incredibly well written!
And secondly, you have a wonderful speaking voice, my friend!! Seriously, I’d be perfectly content listening to you read a phone book!
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Thanks a bunch. After re-listening to it though, I don’t care for my readings! Hahah… Seriously.
I’m too much of a perfectionist and I always find a reason that I messed it up, in my opinion.
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I think you’re overthinking it. It sounded great! And I’m not just saying that to be nice.
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Well, I’ve improved it and now I’m okay with it ;P Thank you ma dear. I’ve found that if I record it one section at a time it’s much easier not to get tongue tied! So of those rhymes are hard to read through in one go without getting twisted. ❤ Thank you thank you.
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In which context do you mean that I need to work on my rhythm and pauses? With my reciting of the poetry in audio?
It’s new territory for me. This is only my 2nd attempt at it.
As for the Persians, I don’t really know enough about them to even have an opinion.
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I love it Mathew, you have a wonderful voice. A voice I can relax to and listen to it for hours.
Thank you for doing it my friend.
I cheer on you. I hope you read more of your poems so I can listen❤️
Take care.
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Thanks Orki! As always ❤
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My pleasure, always❤️never stop, I cheer on you🎶👏🏻
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Growing up, I wanted to name my family’s English bulldog Leonidas. The answer was no. Lol.
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Lmao… Why? I like it! They could’ve Nicknamed him Leo lol
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Have brave!
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Admit Mathew.
You were a lord’s favourite bard in a previous life.
Truly in the heroic style.
Well done!
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Thanks so much! I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it as much as I’ve enjoyed writing it. This one was special to me. 😀
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Oh that does indeed come through.
Splendidly. 👍
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