The window to my soul seems darker now.
Its transparency is clouded by crimson blues.
Like stained glass tempered to withstand hard blows,
I can see my life only through this disillusionment.
The darkness is thick except for these crimson rays.
Lost, but I’m searching – from here, will I ever find my way?
Cold and alone, in this prison of my own, calm and still.
Like a kiss from above, the blue sunshine warms my face.
Perhaps I am the darkness that the sun longs to reclaim
My heart is the cage, and this prison is its frame.
Can a being, such as me, ever find their saving grace?
I’d found this old poem which I had written for Reddit a long while ago floating on the internet on someone else’s website. Thought I might as well share it on my own. :p
Beautiful poetry, with a great accompanying image!
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Thanks Tom!
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Wow, raw truth, as if you are writing from my soul.
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We share the same soul? :p
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Apparently, connected via the misery lol
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😂
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Love this
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“Like a kiss from above, the blue sunshine warms my face.
Perhaps I am the darkness that the sun longs to reclaim”
Ohh these lines got to me …..how beautiful ….. how redeeming ….. how poetic! 💕💕💕
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❤ ❤ ❤
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❤️❤️❤️
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Sounds Like, you’ve, overcome, the more difficult parts of your life now…
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I’d like to think so
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I was about to marked “Cold and alone, in this prison of my own, calm and still.” as my favorite line but the next and the next is just as beautiful, so forget it. I love the whole poem.
and just wait a minute… you found this poem on someone else website? Did they credit you as a writer? If not, oh my gosh, that’s plagiarism!
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Yeah they credited my old username. I’ll consider writing them 😝
Thanks so much Jess. ❤
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I am glad you brought this out of the archives! Beautifully written!
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Thanks man! Appreciate it. Deleted it off my blog quite a while ago thinking I didn’t like it but I do quite like it now.
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Thank you for sharing.
I am so glad❤️I love this poem.. but hey.. it’s nothing unusual…
I love your work, but you know that🎶🐺
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I know you’re the best fan girl a boy could ask for 😀 ❤
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Thank you❤️for your kind words.
I hope you are well🌹
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